Hallo liebe Leute,
Ich habe für meine Bewerbung jetzt einen Brief an meine zukünftige Host Family geschrieben und würde mich generell über jegliche vorschläge oder Verbesserungen freuen, weil ich ein bischen Sorge habe
eher unsympathisch an manchen stellen zu wirken...
Also, Ich würde mich super freuen über jegliche kritik oder kommentare! 
Dear host family,
At first I have to say that I am so happy that you chose me and I get the chance to be a member of your family! In this letter I want to tell you more about myself, so you can get to know me a little bit better before I arrive.
I am Leander, I am 15 years old and I will be 16 when I am in the USA.
I live in Berlin, the capital of Germany, together with my parents.
Berlin is a big city and I love that, there are many different places, but they're all connected by metro. It's really fun to be spontanous, sometimes if I meet with my friends we just discover a new place in the city.
Now I want to tell you more about my family! My parents xxx and xxx are 49 and 48, my brother xxx is 19 years old. My brother moved to xxx like two months ago to study at a university there, but he visits us regularly. I would also love to have a dog, but when there's school, no one is home and then he would be alone.
As you read in my application before, my hobbies are tricking, drawing and playing the piano, But one thing I started to enjoy in the past is working with kids and that is why I help leading the confirmation class at my local church. For me it is really important to mention that I am barely religious, but we have a really friendly community there. Together with other youths and friends and the pastor we lead a fun confirmation class. It's cool to learn how to lead groups and at the same time I am with friends of mine.
My favorite hobby currently is tricking though, I already tried to explain what this sport is, in my application before, so I am leaving this part out now, but I highly encourage you to watch some cool youtube videos! 
Sport in general is really relieving for me and it feels good sometimes to just focus on the training.
Well, I feel like this is still not much information, but I hope you know a tiny bit more now about me!
I am super excited about my echange year and I think it will be awesome!
With best regards
Leander
Ich hätte auch gerne noch bischen mehr geschrieben, aber es gibt ein limit von 2000 buchstaben.
Würde mich freuen wenn ihr mir helft
